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Another experimental mixed media study from last week :)

:painter: mixed media (watercolor, chalk, white ink) on 300g Canson paper, 24 x 32 cm / 9.4 x 12.6 ", October 2012

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Critique by ^Astralseed Oct 9, 2012, 2:38:41 PM
As always this piece of yours doesn't disappoint but I think there are a few things which may have pushed it a bit further and made it ever more appealing. First I noticed the right eye which appears unfinished? I'm not sure if that was intentional or not but it does come across very unfinished. The next thing that stands out to me is the bridge of her nose. It seems a bit wide. I think that if you added a bit of shading in the corner side of the left eye it would make her bridge appear a bit slimmer. And the last thing that stands out to me is the sun burst? behind her. It feels a bit forced in comparison to the rest of the painting and your paintings in general which are usually quite fluid. I almost wonder if you felt uncomfortable painting that aspect since it just doesn't seem to fit. Regardless, I adore the girls expression and her freckles and still feel that this is a great piece.
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*Shelfcloud Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Like the texture and colormix!
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~Willis-Crisp Oct 10, 2012  Student Writer
Beautifully drawn human and I like how you're not too strict with colours :)
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~anyazalia Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so beautiful!!!!
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*Unpredictabloo Oct 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Lovely! As usual, beautiful colors and expression :D
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=jane-beata Oct 9, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you :)
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~Mayeaux Oct 8, 2012
Nice work!
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~gotw3 Oct 8, 2012  Student General Artist
This is really pretty! :0
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*Ev-sta Oct 8, 2012
I like this one a lot, i like the colors you used and how you added the freckles on the face. The right eye seems like its Unfinished instead of the look of it being covered by the hair, i think added subtle colors instead of having the pupil white would help it. Great work! im jealous that you have so much time to paint!! or dedicate time to painting! lol
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=jane-beata Oct 9, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you Evan, the right eye was an experiment, I've tried to paint this particular face for about 4 times and every time I messed up something badly. I do have a lot of time to paint, but even my lifestyle has very anti-jealousable (new word!) cons that I believe nobody would trade with me ;)
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