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Graphite exercise, eyes of a friend

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2B Graphite stick on a white paper - I tried to keep editing of a photograph to minimum. Original is hanging in my studio (:

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1600x1064px 1015.13 KB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D3200
Shutter Speed
1/125 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
40 mm
ISO Speed
360
Date Taken
Sep 22, 2012, 4:47:56 PM
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Your technique is outstanding and the piece is very realistic! I have very few critiques. One, I think it would pop more if you popped the contrast or in other words, darkened your darks more and lighten some of your lights. Also, maybe be a little more gradual in blending the top of the nose from the side of the eyes. I feel like there is just a thick white line going down the center of the nose, gradually blend out so it isn't so sharp. That's pretty much all I have to say great work! You' are extremely talented!