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:painter: watercolor, chalk, pen on 300g artist paper, 42 x 30 cm, March 2012

:bulletpurple: Original painting: sold.

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:bulletblack:WATERCOLOR / MIXED MEDIA
:bulletblack: PORTRAITS
:bulletblack:TUTORIALS
:bulletblack:TEXTURES






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Image size
1024x712px 210.84 KB
Make
Panasonic
Model
DMC-LZ6
Shutter Speed
10/300 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Mar 5, 2012, 12:22:47 AM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

im writing this because i saw it in SelfTaughtArtist's critique folder <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> first off, i love your color choice. the red in contrast with the blue really does a lot for this portrait. here are some of the things im seeing that bother me: The far eye isnt there. now, i THINK it's because the hair is supposed to be covering it, but the way this is portrayed, the depth of field isnt there. it appears that you can see the beginning of the socket. maybe add a shadow or show the corner of the other eye to create that overlapping effect <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> The teeth also bother me xD but! this is amazing and im sure you know it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> fantastic job